Jutting out its neck
The fallen grey willow limb
Turned to a heron
I don't think haiku is really my form. I'm long-winded, and getting to the pure meat of a subject is difficult. Maybe I'll keep trying. If you want to read some amazing haiku, check out Matsuo Basho.
I don't think haiku is really my form. I'm long-winded, and getting to the pure meat of a subject is difficult. Maybe I'll keep trying. If you want to read some amazing haiku, check out Matsuo Basho.
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